Why Must He Write from the Third Person? (ROUND 3)

Let's workshop this poem about a man, characterized by fetishism and severe dissociation, looking back on a crime he carried to heinous extremes due to his struggles to keep more than a semi erection

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Why Must He Write from the Third Person?

Cliché arson could not hide
the rape flub: even with splayed
sashimi trussed like hentai,

at half mast he had to roll
his exchange sister’s finger 
for laptop access and type “asian

teen prolapse” on her kana keys—
hyoid crushed, in the end,
for his open-layup airball.

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