To Disappear

Let's workshop this poem about wanting to disappear from a back-door situation ("sitchy-ation") of humiliation

To Disappear 

She looked back
over her shoulder
with a moan 
as he stood balls
deep (pulsing Kegels)

up her ass, but—
instead of flicking
his tongue, yanking
her hair, landing
a face slap—

he waved Hi 
with cornball sincerity,
grunting through
a gummy Kweli-grin
at his goof.