Firepit

Let's workshop this poem about a young woman prepared to dip down into predatory lows to get what she wants--or at least thinks she wants

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Firepit

So adult one minute (sneaking
beer slugs), but just hours
after leading her dad’s buddy

into the woods she undialated
back to grade ten: on his cell
at dawn insisting he leave

his wife or she’ll cry rape—
whispering, in the gulping
quiet of refusal, “I got your cum!”

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