Etched in Bone Like Orgasm Toe Curling

Let's workshop this poem that juxtaposes the stark alienation of modernity with primal communal experiences, illuminating the profound human need for connection

---

Etched in Bone Like Orgasm Toe Curling

Loneliness cures
we do not know, crooked
in carapaces of concrete
efficiencies, we are 

missing—to find them:
contemplate how long
we spent squatting
in huddles near fire

and scribbling in soot
and dancing under moon
drums, endorphined
by child laughter.

---