Diani (Round 2)
Let’s workshop this poem (a personal fav!) about a man who, by some pheromone or vibration, keeps attracting Gen-Z potheads who like to be choked—choked seemingly for a taste of some private Eden.
Diani I draw mainly those Yes-Daddy blacks (tomboys barely-twenty, tar-lipped bluntheads) who, far from aping Pornhub, really do crave rough chokes to the brink: orgiastic irises rolled back into secret spheres, bullring nostrils flaring in the closure of consciousness.
This poem is unpublished
A poem close to perfect